Failure to Notice
I changed the words a bit and I think I like this version better. I'd been thinking about how I wanted to put it, and an idea came to me at bedtime but when I woke up it was gone! This is pretty close to my nighttime version, I think. One of these days, I am going to learn to take notes when my muse speaks! And speaking of muses, I don't think I posted my photo of my muse on the blog. I'll have to do that another time, in another post.
I like it, Annie.
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It is beautiful on vellum.
ReplyDeleteI like this version better, too, Annie, and often sit up in the dark at night, grab a pen close-by, and scribble a thought on whatever, hoping it's discernable in the morning. Should say, also, that I just listened to the crayola video, tracked it down on you-tube, and may do something with it at the Detention Center. I know I stopped earlier, but got sidetracked, I guess, and never opened it up. Shame on me.
ReplyDeleteLove it, Annie.
ReplyDeleteI like this version better, too. Well said!
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely well-said!
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